After reading this comic, I found the humor in was it was amongst the highest I had ever seen. The use of color is very good, and technique used is very original and creative. However, there is some areas that can be improved, perhaps the use of shading or adding light effects would make the comic more convincing perhaps? But on the more positive side, the idea of the mare falling through the clouds was definitely unexpected, totally original! This is by far one of the best and most funniest comic that I have seen, keep up the good work!