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Why Cloudsdale wasn't chosen to host the Equestria Games.

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:iconbronyforlife99:
After reading this comic, I found the humor in was it was amongst the highest I had ever seen. The use of color is very good, and technique used is very original and creative. However, there is some areas that can be improved, perhaps the use of shading or adding light effects would make the comic more convincing perhaps? But on the more positive side, the idea of the mare falling through the clouds was definitely unexpected, totally original! This is by far one of the best and most funniest comic that I have seen, keep up the good work!
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CLMeow5000 Mar 25, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
she's not a pegasas
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Thunderfeathers1 Jan 23, 2014  New member Student Digital Artist
hahahahah XD i so get it
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:iconrainbowredpony123:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!.... I get it!
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:iconspartanfoks:
There is a simple spelling error on the last panel. "Eariler"
Other than that, I like it.
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DragoLord19D Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not the fall that kills, it's the sudden stop.;)
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Aros2 Sep 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, that suddenly makes sense.
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TobiIsABunny Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahhahaha
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WazzupPonyz Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad I'm not the only one who was wondering about this! How in Equestria were the games going to be held in Cloudsdale when Pegsai are the only ponies that can walk on clouds?!? 
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AydinPrower7 Aug 4, 2013   General Artist
www.youtube.com/watch?v=MUL5w9… First thing that comes to mind. :XD:
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:iconbronyforlife99:
just how far up is Cloudsdale?
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