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Why Cloudsdale wasn't chosen to host the Equestria Games.

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After reading this comic, I found the humor in was it was amongst the highest I had ever seen. The use of color is very good, and technique used is very original and creative. However, there is some areas that can be improved, perhaps the use of shading or adding light effects would make the comic more convincing perhaps? But on the more positive side, the idea of the mare falling through the clouds was definitely unexpected, totally original! This is by far one of the best and most funniest comic that I have seen, keep up the good work!
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MetroXLR99 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This reminds me of a certain Coyote..and, a "dippy dog."
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Persona22 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
I was actually thinking the same thing.
If only Pegasus can walk on clouds, and the Equestria Games are for all ponies... then how in the world were they ever going to host the darn thing!?
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devildragon1 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
that....explains a lot. O.o
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kennyg302 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
Tomoya Okazaki (Laughing Hard) [V1] HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
*busts a lung*HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....ah. 
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CLMeow5000 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
she's not a pegasas
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Thunderfeathers1 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
hahahahah XD i so get it
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RainbowRedPony123 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!.... I get it!
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Spartanfoks Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
There is a simple spelling error on the last panel. "Eariler"
Other than that, I like it.
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DragoLord19D Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not the fall that kills, it's the sudden stop.;)
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Aros2 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, that suddenly makes sense.
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