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The Doctor's Father's Day by JoeyWaggoner The Doctor's Father's Day by JoeyWaggoner
Happy Father's Day Everypony!
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Critique by 149Bonnie149 Jun 23, 2013, 12:01:50 PM
Hello there! This is my first critique, but I'll do my best. So, Allons-y! :iconderpy-hooves:
First thing I wanna say about this comic is, that it's ADORABLE! It is touching, cute and enough small, a fact that made Charlie Brown comics so good; Just enough big to be printed on a T-shirt. This isn't a ''T-shirt comic'', but well done and happy:--)
I can't really say this is original work, since IT IS fanart, but your style saves the picture, you have created a an amazing technique for these comics and pictures of these little ponies! I can't say anything bad about your style, it just took some time to get used to:3 It kinda reminds me of Disney's storyboard artists work, but opposite to them, your work looks finished and not rushed! It's simple and fits comics very well.
The Father's Day idea is very nice and having Dinky in this comic just makes me go all fangirl about it :iconso-awesomeplz: It was a smart idea to use her, being Derpy's daughter and all but we all knew that already. I just have to say,beautiful work, funny, cute and touching, as always!
(Even if Dinky looks kinda creepy in the fifth panel ;D)
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:iconexistenceinanutshell:
existenceinanutshell Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just so amazing.

It makes me want to cry!
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:iconthelittleroar:
TheLittleRoar Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Awww so cute!!
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:icondevianpony02:
DevianPony02 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww
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:iconphoenixkittyx5:
PhoenixKittyx5 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Student General Artist
so cute!
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:iconblueblurbabe:
Blueblurbabe Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If this would go down, THIS IS HOW IT SHOULD BE!
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:iconbacon641:
bacon641 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
dawwwwww!
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:iconkhough:
KHough Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015
Waaaah! 
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:iconliltwistyocelot:
LilTwistyOcelot Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
NOOO ITS TOO CUTE IM GOING TO EXPLODE
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:iconprincessrobocop:
PrincessRobocop Featured By Owner May 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*dies*
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:iconzanarnaryon:
ZanarNaryon Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The feels
Subtle Derpydoc ship somewhere
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:iconsolarcis:
Solarcis Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is completely adorable!
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:icontwo-crazy-ponies:
Two-Crazy-Ponies Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww...
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:iconcocopuffpuff:
CocoPuffPuff Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Student Artist
D'aw...
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:iconkatjoymad:
Katjoymad Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
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:iconmlpsonicflashofdoom:
MlpSonicFlashOfDoom Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi! I love this comic alot. I'm actually writing a fanfic inspired by it.
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:iconslugponez:
SlugPonez Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
I love this!
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:iconpersiaalizay:
PersiaAlizay Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw
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:icontechmike1:
Techmike1 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWWWW
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:iconheylizabeth01:
Heylizabeth01 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Lovely Shoujo (Pretty Please) [V3] 
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:icongaybiez:
gaybiez Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Would it be okay if I printed this for my Daddy for Father's Day?
I'll give credit of course
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:iconblueblurbabe:
Blueblurbabe Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is the cutest thin I have ever seen!
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:iconshappyra:
Shappyra Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
weardly sinky realy looks like his daughter if we ponyfy from the episodes to mlp >.>
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:iconlainybabby:
lainybabby Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awww and I know shy hes sad, he used to be a father not as a pony but he lost his son and jennie his daughter so hes sad and AAWWWWWW
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
holy hay thats adorable
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:iconhinazuki:
hinazuki Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
awww, this is adorable Love Clap 
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:iconderpyxdoctor:
derpyxdoctor Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014

Derpy: *walks up to doctor with dinky* Hiya doctor!

Doctor: *sad tone* hello miss hooves....

Derpy: Dinky has something to ask you, go ahead muffin...

Dinky: well, today is fathers day and I don't have a dad so...will you be my dad just for today?

Doctor: *cries of joy* of course dinky...*hugs her*

Dinky: *hugs back* yay!

Derpy: well, I better leave you two be...*about to leave*

Doctor: wait Derpy, why don't you join us?

Derpy: I don't know...

Dinky: c'mon mommy, we can be like a happy family!

Derpy: *smiles* ok...

Doctor: splendid!

And the 3 ponies go on a wonderful picnic the end

I'm just imagining if derpy was in this comic, I do find her, dinky and the doctor as a wonderful family! :D

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:iconderpyxdoctor:
derpyxdoctor Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
So cute! Derpy would be so happy!
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:iconslugponez:
SlugPonez Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Sadly, I don't ship that, but the father daughter thing is cute.

Also, Derpy with the Doctor is NOT CANON.
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:iconderpyxdoctor:
derpyxdoctor Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Well its not for YOU. But I'll always ship it. Canon or not ^^
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:iconslugponez:
SlugPonez Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
No really, it is not officially canon. But I'll let you have a different opinion, cause that shipping is cute too.
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:iconmlpsonicflashofdoom:
MlpSonicFlashOfDoom Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well most shippings aren't canon 
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:iconderpyxdoctor:
derpyxdoctor Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
^^ thanks and I respect your opinions
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:iconslugponez:
SlugPonez Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Of course.
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:iconamyrose1710:
amyrose1710 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I cri evrytim lol
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:iconimaginarypeppermint:
ImaginaryPeppermint Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is the sweetest thing. I love this! 
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:iconjhock775:
jhock775 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
awww doctor 10th a new daughter for father's day
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:iconspitfire235:
spitfire235 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
i love this so much!!! and good job oh it!!!Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna 
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:iconmarshmellowtea:
Marshmellowtea Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Every time I look at this I make little whimpering noises *squee*
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:icontb2374:
TB2374 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
DAAAAWWWWWW
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:iconrizbrony:
RizBrony Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
He miss the feeling of being a father...and he's too a grandfather before the Time War...
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:icondarkhypernova:
DarkHypernova Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
One day he will go back, yes he will go back.
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lainybabby Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Agree and I made a comic of him going back, how the Dr went back with Derby horse and to surprise he found out that the TARDIS was hacked so he has to stay in Ponyville for an entire year and when he came back he finally was able to Meg he open the doors of the TARDIS and there he's on empty world there was nothing but horrible horrible stuff like stuff all over the streets and people all over the street dead and he found myself with a water bottle sitting next to a building and she said and then the doctor hug her and then she told him about what happened and it was horrible horrible horrible horrible I can make the fan fiction if you want me to but it might take a very long time and then in the comments I would put the link okay if you want to know what it is so you know the girl with a dune earth to do did you do well tonight le you know that one episode the journey's end and he erased the memory of Donna and during that time when he went to visit well they in my own fanfiction they gave him something and that something is set on a TARDIS and it hacked the partisan we couldn't leave you could only go back in time and stuff with Pony ponies so the with second I'll email for an entire year and during that time the gym got angry and stuff and then they got all villains all bad stuff together and destroyed the earth and then Martha says that um they're out there right now killing universes you need to save on Dr and that is my fanfiction if you really want to know more then I guess I can make a fan fiction and put a link on it ok
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Shyann987 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
My feels Grr.
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:icondragolord19d:
DragoLord19D Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*Hurk*
THUNK.
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:iconaydinprower7:
AydinPrower7 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013   General Artist
You people don't seem to get it do you? Allow me to explain so you all can understand. *ahem* When you're a time traveler you don't always meet people (or in this case, ponies) in the right order! So yes, the Doctor may actually BE Dinky's father, but he doesn't know it yet, and in the future the doctor may not have told her about him BEING a time traveler!!  I hope this cleared that up for you guys.
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:iconfriendlykuromi:
FriendlyKuromi Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
then he figures out she is his daughter >.<
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:iconangel1108:
angel1108 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Happy tears! XD
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:iconcaitwolf:
Caitwolf Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Cute
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:iconcollarbyte:
Collarbyte Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
hrngggh! my heart....
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:iconpskullv:
pskullv Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
Aaaaaannnd, there goes the heart. X3 Emote :eeeee: 
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