This was a project I had to do for my “Visual Storytelling” class last semester. We had to follow a script for the first two pages and improvise the third one. I wanted to think of the most unexpected thing to find in my closet and the first thing to come to mind was Batman.
Why is he in the closet? How did he get there? it looks too cramped(no signs of being like the TARDIS), and why leave him in the closet? Shouldn't he have somewhere else to be? Other than that, why would Batman "roar" as shown in the first comic page squares? If he's hungry, give him a sandwich already. He's not a mouse, so you can give him a cookie without him wanting more, too.
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