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Submitted: June 19, 2012
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A Derpy Love Story page 1by *JoeyWaggoner

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Critique by ~sweetannabee Apr 7, 2013, 9:51:49 AM

I have a lot to say on this one, but it's my first review so sorry if it's bad.

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I definitely like the art, though the eyes look weird for the mares. I honestly don't like those really long eyelashes. I love the "shocked into unconsciousness" part (i heard the whole thing on a youtube comic dub) and i love the Rainbow Dash "ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh" quote. This needs to be 100 words so ummmm l love the colors though you didn't do them, they are every show accurate. The wings for derpy look good and overall I give mostly 5 stars although subtracting a half-star for the long eyelashes.

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